Wednesday, March 16, 2011

Late Last Night


These things always catch us off guard---
and then they make us realize we could dream big
bigger

It was sending small and calculated tremors up my legs
with a vibrato and a stronghold around my knee caps
and it all turned to wonder---

about whether we were good
for each other

and there was all this conjecture
conjuring up here in the treehouse

Wouldn't it just be easier---
if we said it?

or if I showed you the landscape between my eyes and my mouth

yes, that would do it just fine---
because then we could do this all without words

You would see me in my free fall
and you would cock your head to the right
and form a half smile
and mine would rise in return


and we would have the irrevocable understanding

2 comments:

  1. Understanding, sharing, giving oneself is usually a good thing!

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  2. These lines are memorable:

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    Wouldn't it just be easier---
    if we said it?

    or if I showed you the landscape between my eyes and my mouth

    yes, that would do it just fine---
    because then we could do this all without words

    You would see me in my free fall
    and you would cock your head to the right
    and form a half smile
    and mine would rise in return

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    I particularly loved this clever description:

    or if I showed you the landscape between my eyes and my mouth

    Wonderful work.

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