Thursday, December 16, 2010

Thoroughfare


This was the last

oh, the last time I would let you be this way

That was the last time

or so it seems

as it were

where the balloons were beginning to stray

I grew up

up and out of you

because I was only indebted to you for reminding me of what I didn't want

and that---

was this

2 comments:

  1. I hope you grew up and into a wise young gorgeous smart person111111111

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  2. very thoughtful. The vengeance of your pen sees no bounds. Ruthless. But I do like the flip flop writing style, especially the ending:

    ...reminding me of what I didnt' want

    and that –

    was this

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