Thursday, May 27, 2010

The Exquisite Expiration of Effie the Elevator Girl


Loneliness had somehow crept through the walls of the Waldorf Astoria
After all, that's what happens when a war has gone amuck
The sound of once laid plans drowned out by the haunting big band wafting through the box

Up and down and up and down and up and down and up and down she went
An invisible--a mute--a wallflower to the glossimers of high society
She had been dressed by someone else
A burgundy pant suit with the obligatory gamboge fringe
Somewhere along the line she had gotten used to counterfeit regality

Her beauty had gone unnoticed, shielded by the snood and the dregs of being a glorified bellhop
Her kindness and compassion was overlooked--daily--hourly--by the second, in fact
The leading of a solitary life
Up and down and up and down and down

And once--on a Saturday--her lip began to bleed profusely--dripping onto the carpet of the car
The stranger in the hall noticed
then offered his handkerchief--even though it was in a Cagney
And she was moved by this gesture

As she reached her hand out to take it, the car plummeted without so much as a noise
save the swift rush of air down the shaft

The magnificent severance of her top hat--of her top half--of--
the remainder vacant of any liveliness beside her half smile--
staring up at him

And the rest
under a deep plunge into the concrete abyss;
where she would remain--
invisible, a mute, a wallflower


2 comments:

  1. So, so dark. This IS a Stephen King short story. Let it play out in more detail, then hit them with the tragic moment. Good writing.

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  2. Let's get a light and illuminate your world!!!

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